Originally Posted By u k fan Sorry guys, it'll have to be tomorrow. It's 11:30 here and bed is calling!!!
Originally Posted By chickendumpling Oh, sure. Keep your fans hanging. ;p I'm just happy you decided to post here and am really enjoying your story so you won't hear any complaints from me. You go get your beauty sleep and we'll see you soon.
Originally Posted By chickendumpling <-- looks around for other story tellers. <-- remembers awhile back when DAR posted a thread asking people to tell him a bedtime story or something like that and *so* relates to that right now! LOL.
Originally Posted By EdisYoda hmmmm... looks like he violated the performance delay clause... so... Ladies and gentlemen from the snow ball thread... Ready... Aim... FIRE!
Originally Posted By chickendumpling <--- throws herself in front of the barrage of snowballs to save u k fan because she is *that* selfless and wonderful. (Okay, yeah, no. It's because I want to hear how this story ends! ;p LOL.) Gee, EdisYoda - I bet you could make up a funny prequel about Goldilocks and the Three Bears in a big snowball fight! What a fun idea!
Originally Posted By u k fan Ok, so here it is: Part 3! It's been a week in the making, and was written really off the cuff. Because of this I've noticed that my writing style has changed over the three parts from a kind of case file type thing to a simple story. If I had more time I would try to work on that so it became a more consistent story, but anyway without further ado, may I introduce Part 3 Papa Bear grabbed the steering wheel and pulled it hard to the right. The car swerved off of the road missing Goldilocks by inches. Goldilocks screamed. “A Wolf!†She cried. Between the rain and the dark and the glare of the headlights in her eyes she had no idea what was happening as the car growled past her. She continued to run. The next thing Papa Bear knew he was lying on the side of the road. His car was front-end down in a ditch and he had no clue what had happened. The rain had stopped and as he looked up he saw two children silhouetted by the light of the moon, a boy and a girl, watching over him. “Don’t try to move.†Said the boy. “They said not to move you. An ambulance is on the way.†Continued the girl. Papa Bear could see the children were holding something in their hands. “Whassat?†He asked. He seemed to be having trouble opening his mouth. “Bread,†Replied the boy “I’m Hansel and this is my sister Gretel.†“We’re –“ The girl began to speak, but as she was cut short by the wailing of a siren. A moment later the ambulance was there. As Papa Bear was being loaded into the back the children slipped silently away dropping crumbs of bread as they left. “I wish I knew where to find them,†He thought “They deserve some candy.†Goldilocks was still running. Convinced that a wolf was chasing her she didn’t look back. Eyes glowed at her from within tree trunks and as branches pulled at her cape she was sure that they were the hands of the terrible beast that was pursuing her. An owl hooted and bats flew about her head. She screamed as she tripped and crashed to the floor. She scrambled forward and somehow found herself inside a hollow tree trunk. She was so mad at herself; she had become such a cliché. And with that thought the fell asleep instantly. “Well Ma’am, it would seem that your husband is one lucky bear.†The Doctor turned to Mama Bear. “He has suffered a few minor cuts and bruises, but other than that jaw injury he seems to be fine. I suggest he eats soft food for a few days, things like Porridge or Oatmeal or perhaps Soup. Make sure he gets plenty of salt and I suggest he gets as much fresh air and exercise as possible over the weekend. His speech should be fine by the morning.†A tearful Mama Bear hugged her husband and they prepared to go home. Goldilocks awoke with a start. It was light now and she made her way out into the sunlight. She saw that she was actually beside a small pond. She was so thirsty that she ignored the Frog with the Golden Ball and ran to drink as much as she could. She was still hungry though and she still needed help. She adjusted her damp clothes, cursed her stupid cloak and staggered onwards. Meanwhile, not too far away a family of bears were sitting down to breakfast... I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!!!
Originally Posted By u k fan Thanks guys! I think (when I have the time) that I might go back through it and try to make it sound more like it was written in one part and not three. It was fun to write though, I might start on another Fairytale Prologue soon!!!
Originally Posted By Autopia Deb Please do, they're very entertaining. Maybe if you do enough of them you can publish, I'd buy the book.
Originally Posted By u k fan Thanks! Do you just want one copy or should I send more for your frends and family? I'm glad everybody likes it. I just sat down and wrote each part without a lot of planning. I wasn't even sure where I was going with it when I wrote Part 1!!!
Originally Posted By chickendumpling LOL u k fan!!!! What a fun story! Well done!!! You are so witty! I'll be sure to show DD when she gets home. Thanks again for playing. She loves sharing stuff with you guys when she can and I know she'll get a kick out of your story!
Originally Posted By u k fan Thanks Chickie! At some point I might edit it so that it flows better. I really enjoyed writing it though!!!
